How my video feedback helped me make changes to my magazine

My first set of videos I did the two girls told me what they liked best about my magazine. This helped me because when I then went to make changes I made sure I kept the things they said they liked best, for example I made sure I carried on the use of bright colours throughout the magazine as my target audience said that it worked well and made the star on the front cover bigger and brighter as they commented on the fact that it caught their eye and made the front cover look better. The feedback from my videos also made me make improvements to the pictures used in my magazine because the girls said they were important and caught their eye so I wanted to make them look even better and add more pictures because the girls emphasised that pictures that are well edited and look good make the magazine look a lot better. I also used the feedback to give me the confidence to stick with my original ideas, especially in the contents page. I wanted my articles to be spread out on the page with just a line of information about them underneath and although a lot of people said it wouldn't look right or it wouldn't look professional I liked it and thought it did and went well with how I wanted my magazine to look and feel and by one of the girls commenting on the fact that she likes the way the articles are spread out and there isn't many made them feel more individual and she knew what ones were important and what ones to look for at first when she brought the magazine. Doing my second set of target audience helped me make sure that the things that were said in the first set of videos were still good in the second set, for example the bold writing and pictures were said again and the pictures were said they were better.